To: pml1@yahoogroups.com From: Mark Tomlonson Date: Fri, 24 Oct 2003 09:06:43 -0400 Subject: [PML1] CC: Morena Corwen In Morena Corwen's centerfold (September 1992) she's seated at a bar. Judging from her dress, it's not in public. I really love the colors here. I prefer darks to pastels as a rule, so seeing this visual symphony of purple, black and chrome is very pleasing. It reminds me of a cool grape slush on a hot day. The yellow top she's almost wearing is an excellent contrast, as are the wavy neon lamps against the verticals in the bar. With a couple of quibbles, I like Morena's pose, especially what it does for her torso and breasts. I would have her move her left knee ever so slightly to her left to avoid the "I have to go potty" look, and I would have tried for a slightly different expression. This one seems to say, "Are you sure guys will like this, Mr. Fegley?" The alternate photo has one that's very close, but just enough different. I suppose there are some individuals out there who could see this only in terms of Morena playing the part of a bar girl, but she seems too independent and the bar is the wrong kind of bar to make that interpretation stick. Photographer: Richard Fegley Scoring: Pin-up: 1.5 Erotic: 4.0 Artistic: 3.0 Overall: 2.6 out of 4.0 Cyber Club Portfolio Photo I like better than the Centerfold: #32 http://cyber.playboy.com/members/playmates/files/1992/09/centerfold.html http://cyber.playboy.com/members/playmates/files/1992/09/32-lrg.html Mark Tomlonson Kalamazoo MI