To: pml1@yahoogroups.com From: Mark Tomlonson Date: Wed, 28 May 2003 10:10:06 -0400 Subject: [PML1] CC: Leisa Sheridan In Leisa Sheridan's centerfold (July 1993) we've gone back in time 50 years. Soon the radio will be playing the sounds of the big bands as we join her in the bed. We've got good news and bad news here. The bad news: Leisa is standing in the "I gotta go potty" posture. While it makes it possible for her to relate to the radio, it does little to show off her marvelous figure. Maybe I'm being too picky here, but a more natural and relaxed way of holding her hand against the radio would have been better as well. Her relationship to the radio should have been completely redone with an entirely different pose. The good news: This study in browns (including the leather-bound Playboys) does a fantastic job of evoking a romantic and nostalgic mood. I think this is true even if the viewer never experienced this time or setting first hand. Putting Leisa's head in the center of the mirror was dangerous. It could easily look trite, but here it looks natural and avoids any sense of a cliche. Leisa's wonderful face justifies the halo effect of the soft highlight in the mirror. Photographer: Arny Freytag Scoring: Pin-up: 3.0 Erotic: 2.0 Artistic: 2.5 Overall: 2.6 Cyber Club Portfolio Photo I like better than the Centerfold: #37 http://cyber.playboy.com/members/playmates/files/1993/07/centerfold.html http://cyber.playboy.com/members/playmates/files/1993/07/37-lrg.html Mark Tomlonson Kalamazoo MI