To: pml1@yahoogroups.com From: Mark Tomlonson Date: Fri, 10 Oct 2003 09:39:22 -0400 Subject: [PML1] CC: Neriah Davis In Neriah Davis' centerfold (March 1994) she's run her scooter into the soda shop. Now it's time for some other activity generally frowned on in public. This is not one of my favorite centerfolds, but the reasons have nothing to do with either the model or the efforts of the people who produced it. There are some things I've just never cared for in a pin-up, and they've all managed to show up here. I've got trouble with Neriah's zippered panties. Where I expect soft and warm I don't like hard, cold and sharp. The gloves strike me as silly, the shoes ridiculous and the shirt too confining. These are not absolute value judgements, just a reflection of what I don't like. What I do like is the way Neriah is standing. It's challenging, shows some independence on her part (usually a sign of intelligence, a good thing to have in a partner) and makes her look pretty good as well. I also like the balance in texture (except for the panties) between the hard slick scooter, vinyls and the tables and the softer Neriah and her clothing. There's also a good balance between the earth tones and primary colors. Photographer: Stephen Wayda Scoring: Pin-up: 3.0 Erotic: 2.0 Artistic: 2.0 Overall: 2.5 Cyber Club Portfolio Photo I like better than the Centerfold: #59 http://cyber.playboy.com/members/playmates/files/1994/03/centerfold.html http://cyber.playboy.com/members/playmates/files/1994/03/59-lrg.html Mark Tomlonson Kalamazoo MI