To: pml1@yahoogroups.com From: Mark Tomlonson Date: Thu, 30 Oct 2003 18:24:40 -0500 Subject: [PML1] CC: Jean Jani In Jean Jani's centerfold (July 1957) she's stretched out on a sofa, suggesting that the mood music we've picked out has been successful in its intended effect. It's hard for me to separate my feelings for this centerfold, as a child of the '60's looking back at it, from how it stands or falls on its own merits. It's not an aggressively poor pin-up by any measure, but there are a couple of things that give me pause. I don't like the way Jean is posed in relation to the camera's angle. It seems clumsy, awkward, and a bit too conscious of what could and couldn't be shown. Other centerfolds this modest are handled with more grace. Maybe I'm getting hung-up over what I see as "old-woman" panties. They may be practical, but clothing in a pin-up shouldn't have practicality as its main recommendation. I think I would have moved Jeans left leg so the knee was just below her right knee. The rest of the centerfold ranges from good to average in my eye. I like Jean's teasing expression. The round forms in the lower right blend nicely with the rectangular brick and sofa. Her nipples deserve better though. Photographer: Peter Gowland Scoring: Pin-up: 1.5 Erotic: 1.5 Artistic: 2.0 Overall: 1.6 out of 2.0 Cyber Club Portfolio Photo I like better than the Centerfold: #25 http://cyber.playboy.com/members/playmates/files/1957/07/centerfold.html http://cyber.playboy.com/members/playmates/files/1957/07/25-lrg.html Mark Tomlonson Kalamazoo MI