To: pml1@yahoogroups.com From: Mark Tomlonson Date: Fri, 25 Apr 2003 10:31:46 -0400 Subject: [PML1] CC: Zahra Norbo In Zahra Norbo's centerfold (March 1958) she's trying way too hard to welcome us back to camp after a day in the woods. I've never liked this centerfold. I like the way Zahra looks. She's a little heavier than most nude models but she's up to snuff in terms of the ability to project a mood. My quarrel is that the mood she's projecting is so stupid. It's hard for me to look at all the portfolio shots that are alternate treatments of the centerfold and believe that this shot was the winner. I can see the mood they were trying for, but the pose and the hand on the cheek are just too stilted to make it work. The alternate is much better for its ability to capture a moment. The other centerfold takes are also good. I like the colors. I like the way Zahra wears a Mackinaw and nothing else. I like the somewhat surprising play of the red and grey color scheme. All of the shots are fairly modest, but few strike the false note the centerfold does. The centerfold does do a good job of showing what Zahra wanted to show. Photographer: Tom Caffrey Scoring: Pin-up: 1.0 Erotic: 1.0 Artistic: 2.0 Overall: 1.2 out of 4.0 Cyber Club Portfolio Photo I like better than the Centerfold: # 14 A much better realization of the centerfold's theme. http://cyber.playboy.com/members/playmates/files/1958/03/centerfold.html http://cyber.playboy.com/members/playmates/files/1958/03/14-lrg.html Mark Tomlonson Kalamazoo MI