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From: Mark Tomlonson
Date: Tue, 23 Dec 2003 10:35:43 -0500
Subject: [PML1] CC: Summer Altice

In Summer Altice's centerfold (August 2000) she's kneeling on her bed, 
looking anxious to get started.

There's a lot to like here, including Summer. Even better, she's been 
posed in a way that really plays up to her strong points. In my eyes she 
has extremely attractive breasts. Sure, they're small, but when they 
have a set of curves this pleasing, who cares? A personal preference, 
but for me it's always about lines, not size.

Summer got an excellent treatment around her face as well. Her eyes 
really sparkle and her hair is full and flowing. The smile is very 
inviting and darn it all, just plain cute.

The only change I would make to this shot is to give Summer a slightly 
more aggressive posture. She would inspire more fantasies if she looked 
more certain of what she was doing. In this case that's a fairly minor 
point.

I like the choice of the newsprint pattern on the sheets. It's a unique 
way of introducing a light grey background. Making the bottom lighter 
than the top of the photo directs us towards the brightness of Summer's 
eyes and smile. Good places for our eyes to spend time.

Photographer: Stephen Wayda

Scoring:
Pin-up: 3.5
Erotic: 3.5
Artistic: 3.0

Overall: 3.4 out of 4.0

Cyber Club Portfolio Photo I like better than the Centerfold: # 18

http://cyber.playboy.com/members/playmates/files/2000/08/centerfold.html
http://cyber.playboy.com/members/playmates/files/2000/08/18-lrg.html

Mark Tomlonson
Who just now realized how closely this critique echoes his post of a few 
moments ago
Kalamazoo MI