To: pml1@yahoogroups.com From: Mark Tomlonson Date: Wed, 17 Dec 2003 09:44:38 -0500 Subject: [PML1] CC: Heather Spytek In Heather Spytek's centerfold (June 2001) she's in a baseball dugout, about to improve the morale of at least one of the Boys of Summer. Heather's got a pretty good-looking body (ahem) but it's her face that really shines. It's no wonder then that two major compositional lines draw our attention to it. Her smiling face has been placed at the intersection of the line of the rafters and the line formed by the bat and her right arm. To draw further attention, her hair has been combed over to the left side of her face to form a background. It's here that the centerfold fails most. The hairstyle is so unnatural and so forced that it then begins to detract from Heather. Heather has a wonderful smile here, but it's not particularly erotic. That's O.K. A pin-up doesn't need to get a rise out of its viewer if it can convey the attractiveness and more importantly, the desirability of the model. There is no failing on that point here. Even though Heather's a full-frontal nude, there is much left to the viewer's imagination. We write our own story, which is fine by me. Photographer: Stephen Wayda Scoring: Pin-up: 2.0 Erotic: 2.0 Artistic: 2.0 Overall: 2.0 out of 4.0 Cyber Club Portfolio Photo I like better than the Centerfold: #3 http://cyber.playboy.com/members/playmates/files/2001/06/centerfold.html http://cyber.playboy.com/members/playmates/files/2001/06/03-lrg.html Mark Tomlonson Kalamazoo MI